My Rantings and Other Non-Sensical Thoughts

I'm really nervous to do this, but I'm gonna put it out there anyway. I've been writing a story since the end of July. I'm currently on about page 25. It's about a girl who is obsessed with a rock star (sound familiar?). She meets him and realizes that he's just a regular person doing an irregular job, yada, yada, yada. Keep in mind this is a total chick story. Also keep in mind that it's a ROUGH draft. I haven't put many scenic details in and I could expand on a lot of the detail stuff like what she looks like, etc. I plan to do that once I get the basic story out. Be nice please since I've been writing it for 4 hours today alone! Anyway, the doc is a Word doc, so you need Word to view it. It's also password protected. Why? Just because. Each chapter is named after a song, which I thought was clever of me. :) Be kind in your criticism, please. You can find the story here. What's the password, you ask? I was going to make you AIM me if you wanted it, but that's too time consuming. In addition, I don't feel like removing the password protection, so you'll have to guess the password based on this post. Good luck! (For those of you who've read parts of it already, everything after this picture: is an update.

posted by Chris O. @ 9/12/2004 09:42:00 PM